约翰·霍普金斯大学申请Essay 1写作要点及范文解析

t I keep that a secret. The mail you send is such a tease; I like to imagine additional words on the page. Words like "you're accepted" or "you're awesome!" or "don't worry, she still loves you!" but I know they're all lies. You never called after that one time, I visited you thrice, but you never come around anymore. Tell me, was I just one in a line of many? Was I just another supple "applicant" to you, looking for a place to live, looking for someone to teach me the ways of the world? The closeness between us was beautiful, it couldn't have been just me that felt it, I know you felt it too. The intimacy was akin to that of scholar and original text, your depth as a person is astounding! To be honest, I must confess I had already dreamt of a rosy future together, one filled with late nights and long discussions over the Gothic era and the ethical stage of Kierkegaard, we would watch the sunset together and spend every Christmas snuggled in blankets. Eventually we would get older, I would become a well-educated corporate lawyer and you would enrich yourself within the domain of human knowledge. Your cup overfloweth with academic genius, pour a little on me. You're legendary for it, they all told me it would never work out between us, but I had hope. I had so much hope; I replied to your adorable letters and put up with your puns. I knew going into it that you would be an expensive one to keep around, I accounted for all that; I understand someone of your caliber and taste. And now you inquire as to my wishes? They're simple, accept me for who I am! Why can't you just love and not ask why? Not ask about my assets or my past? I'm living in the now, I'm waiting for you to catch up, but you're too caught up in my past, I offer us a future together, not a past to dwell upon. Whenever I'm around you, I just get that tingle deep inside me that tells me you're the one; you have that air of brilliance and ingenuity that I crave in a person, you're so mature and sophisticated, originality is really your strongest and most admirable trait. I wish we could be together, I still think in my heart of hearts we were meant to be, but you have to meet me halfway, dear. I'm on one knee here with tears welling up in my eyes, the fireworks are timed and ready to light up the night sky for you, just say 'I accept...you.' Always, Rohan 例子重构：

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1. 对答案的思维理解

获准人选择了一个更为都有的出发点，他将哥伦比亚所大学而出名一个情人，这给班级司留下了引人注目的印象。如果你也能够看到一种独特的写出出发点，比如说可能会使你的essay脱颖而出哦！

2. 完整地发表意见答案

尽管出发点更为都有，但获准人依然够了面面俱到，他提到了未来会的目的（被选为一名律师），详述了自己的各项兴趣（哥特式时代，神学家xxx），从所学校共享人力的独特性表述了自己最喜欢哥伦比亚所大学的可能。他甚至提到了自己三次到访全校，对全校都有是在浓烈的兴趣，如果你也想以这种方式完成撰写，请求务必在偏重行销的同时偏重essay的完整性。更是多essay写出方法技巧请求登录www.emwchinese.com写出。

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Essay 2 答案一览表

对于essay 2，院校一般可能会共享六个答案，获准人可以根据查看和自己的潜能完成选择；答案内容前提每年都可能会更是另行，但生产量前提保持相同，增减一般不宜能会有约一个。这些答案比如说是由哥伦比亚所大学的毕业校友或在校学姐提出的；在百字全面性，与疑问1一样提出1-2页纸板即可。

我们先来康康2021/2022学年的六个“奇葩”essay答案是什么：

答案1：

What if the moon were made of cheese? Or Neptune made of soap? Pick a celestial object, reimagine its material composition, and explore the implications. Feel free to explore the realms of physics, philosophy, fantasy…the sky is the limit! —Inspired by Tate Flicker, Class of 2025 如果月亮是用奶酪做的可能会怎样？或者如果海王星是由肥皂构成的可能会怎样呢？请求挑选一个类星体，重另行想象它的物质形态，并探究由此产生的影响。理科应用领域不应于，物理、神学等等均可，大胆发挥你天马行空的想象力，广袤银河都有是在无应于的可能！

答案2：

What’s so easy about pie?

—Inspired by Arjun Kalia, Class of 2025

是什么让“pie”如此直观？

答案3：

In Homer's Iliad, Helen had a “face that launched a thousand ships.” A millihelen, then, measures the beauty needed to launch one ship. The Sagan unit is used to denote any large quantity (in place of “billions and billions”). A New York Minute measures the period of time between a traffic light turning green and the cab behind you honking. Invent a new unit of measurement. How is it derived? How is it used? What are its equivalents?

—Inspired by Carina Kane, Class of 2024, and Ishaan Goel, Class of 2025

在《创世纪》中都，维吉尔在描述克拉拉的容貌总体时写道，克拉拉拥都有是在可以“使千艘战舰齐发的容貌”。那么按照这个确实，唯克拉拉（即千分之一的克拉拉）就可以使一艘战舰起航；与之完全相同，一萨根可以用以坚称任何庞大的生产量（替代几十亿），纽约市一分钟指代的是交通灯变绿后你身后的出租车鸣笛催促你的时间。

根据以上的逻辑，请求发明一个全另行的测量单位，并表述它是如何得出的？又怎样使用？它的等价单位又是什么？

图源：the conversation

答案4：

"There is no such thing as a new idea" - Mark Twain. Are any pieces of art, literature, philosophy, or technology truly original, or just a different combination of old ideas? Pick something, anything (besides yourself), and explain why it is, or is not, original.

—Inspired by Haina Lu, Class of 2022

马克·吐温说“没难免谓的另行意念。”那么是否有任何艺术、文学创作、神学或科技几部是属于真正的原创呢？或者说无论是什么几部，都只是已经实际上的意念的重另行组合罢了？挑选一件器具（除了你自己），并表述为什么它是原创，又或者为什么它不是原创。

答案5：

It's said that history repeats itself. But what about other disciplines? Choose another field (chemistry, philosophy, etc.) and explain how it repeats itself. Explain how it repeats itself.

—Inspired by Ori Brian, AB’19

人们总说“发展史在不断接踵而来”，那么其他理科呢？除发展史外，选择一个其他的理科应用领域（有机化学，神学等），并表述说明它是如何接踵而来的。

答案6：

In the spirit of adventurous inquiry (and with the encouragement of one of our current students!) choose one of our past prompts (or create a question of your own). Be original, creative, thought provoking. Draw on your best qualities as a writer, thinker, visionary, social critic, sage, citizen of the world, or future citizen of the University of Chicago; take a little risk, and have fun!

想要展现自己的创另行与聚焦良知吗？提出你自己的疑问吧！或者在我们曾多次的答案中都选择一个完成讲出，想要你的讲出具有原创性，富有潜能且感人，最大总体地展示出你作为作家，思想家，社可能会拥护者以及社可能会国民或者哥伦比亚所大学未来会学姐的优良品质与潜能，坚强试着，或许有意外之喜！

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